Those periwinkle eyes
Which used to remind us of the twilit skies
Tell us, now, of those perilous waters
On which natives travel, only to get slaughtered.
Those auburn curls
Which we loved to twist and twirl
Scorch us, now, like a blazing flame
Fiery, evil and untamed.
Everything about you has been stained
Maybe all your purity was feigned
You are a monster made by fate
Waiting to raze innocence, of late.
Wow. That felt good.
Good poem! The first four couplets are excellent, great use of rhyme, rhythm and imagery
Dude,that is imaginative.
I’m guessing there’s no specific “we” or “you”.Or is there???
Whichever one,you write reaaaaaalllllllllllllllllly well.
And the exams won’t be that bad. We’ve already written mock…….. practice makes perfect,right???(Well,I hope so,at least).
No. there is no specific ‘we’ or ‘you’.
I hope so too. Really really hope so.
whoa! that was exotic! made absolutely no sense at all to me. As you know, I suck at poetry
Um… thanks.
Yeah right. You just don’t have much interest in poetry. Believe me, you don’t suck at it. I’ve seen those poems you’ve written in your personal diary **whoops.**
Great piece from you Achu! Really Really Nice!! No words to express my feelings.
Whoa, thanks! Really really thanks.