There’s a place far away
Where the dewdrops
Aren’t made from tears
And the night skies
Aren’t made from dark smog
And the tints in flowers
Aren’t blood smears
There is a place far away
Where time
Isn’t a measure of eternity
Where happiness
Isn’t like the tides of seas
Where memories don’t evaporate
Like fraternity.
There’s a place far away.
Where greed and envy
Are not found.
Where harsh elapsed words
Stay forgotten
Where love is forever
Like the breeze’s sound
There’s a place far away
Where everything
Was perfect
And still is,
Only and only because
It’s far away
From here.
u really think out of the blog..!! 😀 sooper.. 😀
Thank you. 🙂
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!
Dude,I’m not sure I’m spelling things right at this moment…….
I AM STUNNED. 😮
You completely rock at this.Awesooooooooooome descriptions…..beautiful words…..and the poem made amazing sense.
I’m not sure what adjectives to use…..it’s just PERFECT.
Awesome work,Achu!!!!(Remember us when you get famous…..please????)
And you’ve written 3 novels????THREE???Are they a trilogy???(we’re gunna torture you for info on them in school,btw)
Beautiful profile,too-I agree with most of it.All of us who sit in corners and are secretly jealous of confident people…..all of us who “slay” time and silently self-pity ourselves agree with you(in other words,me).
Shriya agrees with all of this.
Whoa. I’m not awesome or anything. **blushing** There are so many other people who are WAY better at this.
But thanks a lot. I’m blushing right now you know. It’s invisible, but yeah. SO BLUSHING.
And no. The what I call ‘novels’ aren’t a trilogy. And they suck, by the way, so you wouldn’t want to read them. 🙂
I want to read them!!!!!
You have to show them to us!!!!!!!!!!!
And nothing you write can suck.
Aw, thanks! 🙂